Monday, 31 August 2015

Why Should We Not Have Homework

The Learning Intention: I am learning to write Persuasively
The Success Criteria:How I can achieve this
  1. State your opinion in the Introduction  and who is your audience
  2. Give 3 detailed reasons to support your opinion. One reason per paragraph
  3. Try to give facts or statistics to support your reasons.
  4. Use emotive and persuasive language.
  5. Go the progression on the writing wall to check where you are at with writing persuasively.
  6. Assess what you are doing well. Reflect and action what your next step is.


Why Should We Have Homework

Dear, Principal & Teachers, I think in my opinion is not to have homework. [Why] Because people that get there home learning, they leave to home not being bothered doing it at home.

Firstly, Their parents are asking for more homework which is when the children are not wanting their homework.

Secondly, If children don’t do homework they won’t learn when they go through into intermediate and high school and keep on going to an adult.

Thirdly, When children get their homework they either…... Have know time to do their homework or they have to be at places at that time of the day.

In my opinion, We should
have HOMEWORK.

Monday, 17 August 2015

SAY NO TO A SUPERMARKET!!

The Learning Intention: I am learning to write Persuasively
The Success Criteria:How I can achieve this
  1. State your opinion in the Introduction  and who is your audience
  2. Give 3 detailed reasons to support your opinion. One reason per paragraph
  3. Try to give facts or statistics to support your reasons.
  4. Use emotive and persuasive language.
  5. Go the progression on the writing wall to check where you are at with writing persuasively.
  6. Assess what you are doing well. Reflect and action what your next step is.

SAY NO TO A SUPERMARKET!
Dear, The Hastings City Council, Parkvale school are outraged from the local supermarket getting built in our school grounds. The city council have noticed that students, teachers and parents are worried by a local supermarket getting built in the parkvale school grounds.


Firstly, The local supermarket is going to affect students and teachers while they are working at parkvale school.  


Secondly, The local supermarket would be dangerous for the other younger students from traffic roaming around.


Thirdly, The local supermarket will be destroying our native environment from all the trash and causing Mr Rowe to pick and clean up from the local supermarket.
In my opinion, Some residents are absolutely wondering “why have another local supermarket in such a (school ground) when we have many local supermarkets around town.
Kind Regards,
Aspen.

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